Nutrition Ignition
Posted in Health and Nutrition on 04/14/2010 08:15 pm by Steven NerenbergWhat do you think of my lyrics?
Just read a few truly awful raps on here and wanted an honest opinion on some of mine…. if its a face palm moment feel free to say…
Its an addiction, chemical jurisdiction,
my prediction? I’ll be floating in space like science fiction
and the lights on…my girls gone home,
I got the green chron, so I hit the bong,
Dereliction of my thoughts, red-eye with no cognition,
A depiction of a sinner but I’ve got no convictions,
Or restrictions, if I need it my weeds my ammunition
A transition period, my mind be on a mission,
and if I’m mal-nourished, sensi be my main nutrition,
my solution is a blunt with a flame for the ignition
I’m 27, white from the UK. By the way.
A little old? Thanks.
Fair enough on the 3/10 I see what you’re saying.
Will work on the punch line thing. Thanks.
No real flow or subject matter or punchlines, so I can’t like this verse too much. It sounds like you just put addiction into a rhyming dictionary.
3/10
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